The feedback that I noticed was most important was cutting
down on the time I sent introducing the product and focusing on the why of the
product. What surprised me the most was the out pouring of support for my pitch
and how much constructive feedback was received. With that being said I do not
thing there was any feedback that was wrong or silly per say but the most helpful
was the idea of cutting short my introduction of the product and explaining how
I will be able to successfully penetrate the market.
Finally, I changed the amount of time that I introduced myself
and the product and added to why the product will be different from competitors
and how I plan to penetrate the market. I hope that the feedback that I receive
on this pitch is much more helpful than the last and that everyone can see my
product more clearly now.
Hey Austin,
ReplyDeleteI think that you did a great job of limiting the time spent on introducing yourself and the way that you re-assigned that time to the assessment of competitors. This will probably be better as a draw for investors as they care more about the potential success of a product rather than your personal background. However, your video angle did not seem professional so I would say that you should set the camera so the video is not shaky.
-Jordan Jacobs