Thursday, April 2, 2020

Elevator Pitch No. 3

https://youtu.be/RE2Vs7GJFLs


The feedback was making my video more about the product rather than me and making sure the camera was more stable, however given the circumstances of moving out do to COVID-19 I had to make do with what I had at the moment of recording. I was pleasantly surprised with the professional nature at which the critiques were given. With that being said I do not thing there was any feedback that was wrong or silly per say but the most helpful was the idea of focusing and narrowing down the video to my product.

Finally, I changed the amount of time that I introduced myself and the product and added to why the product will be different from competitors and focusing more on the product that I have in mind. I hope that this pitch is even better now given the circumstances of what is occurring. 

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